diff --git a/versions/3.0.md b/versions/3.0.md
index 2c9c85c356..4a286cf6e4 100644
--- a/versions/3.0.md
+++ b/versions/3.0.md
@@ -2046,15 +2046,15 @@ ColorSelection:
 
 Would produce three links with the `colorName` of `red`, `green`, and `blue`:
 
-As with all links, it is at the clients' discretion to follow them, neither 
-permissions nor the ability to make a successful call to that link is guaranteed 
+Clients follow all links, including these, at their own discretion. Neither 
+permissions, nor the capability to make a successful call to that link, is guaranteed 
 solely by the existence of a relationship.
 
 
 ##### Example
 
 The example below shows how relationships in the BitBucket API can be represented 
-with the link schema. This example uses `operationId` values to link responses to 
+by the link schema. This example uses `operationId` values to link responses to 
 possible operations.
 
 ```yaml
@@ -2280,7 +2280,7 @@ components:
       href: 'https://na2.gigantic-server.com/#/paths/~12.0~1repositories~1{$response.body#/username}'
 ```
 
-Note that in the use of `operationRef`, the _escaped forward-slash_ is necessary when 
+Prefixing `operationRef` using the _escaped forward-slash_ is necessary when 
 using JSON references.
 
 #### <a name="headerObject"></a>Header Object