Make some wording tweaks

These changes are more subjective.

Author: jamespwilliams

pages/docs/manual/latest/pipe.mdx

@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ a(one, two, three);
 
 This also works with labeled arguments.
 
-Pipes are used to emulate object-oriented programming, e.g. what's `myStudent.getName` in other languages like Java would be `myStudent->getName` in ReScript (aka `getName(myStudent)`). This allows us to have the readability of the good parts of OOP without its downside of dragging in a huge class system just to call a function on a piece of data.
+Pipes are used to emulate object-oriented programming. For example, `myStudent.getName` in other languages like Java would be `myStudent->getName` in ReScript (equivalent to `getName(myStudent)`). This allows us to have the readability of OOP without the downside of dragging in a huge class system just to call a function on a piece of data.
 
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