Merge pull request #8614 from MicrosoftDocs/swd_offline-sync-icon

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Author: sericks007

powerapps-docs/mobile/offline-sync-icon.md

@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ The offline sync icon changes based on the app's sync status. The following tabl
 | Icon | Description |
 |------|--------------|
 | ![Icon showing that the app is connected to the internet.](media/connected.png "Icon showing that the app is connected to the internet.")| The app is connected to the internet. |
-| ![Icon showing that the app isn't connected to the internet.](media/not-connected.png "Icon showing that the app isn't connected to the internet.") | The app is not connected to the internet. |
+| ![Icon showing that the app isn't connected to the internet.](media/not-connected.png "Icon showing that the app isn't connected to the internet.") | The app isn't connected to the internet. |
 | ![Icon showing that the app is syncing data.](media/synching.png "Icon showing that the app is syncing data.") | The app is syncing data. |
 | ![Icon showing that the app has pending changes to upload.](media/upload-pending-changes.png "Icon showing that the app has pending changes to upload.") | The app has pending changes to upload. |
 | ![Icon showing that the synchronization process encountered an error.](media/error.png "Icon showing that the synchronization process encountered an error.") | The synchronization process encountered an error. |
@@ -42,19 +42,19 @@ The offline sync icon changes based on the app's sync status. The following tabl
 ## Types of offline syncs
 Data is synchronized from Dataverse to your device over the lifetime of your app using several synchronization modes.
 
-- **First sync** - This sync is the initial offline sync that occurs for the Power Apps mobile app. All data in the offline profile is downloaded to the device. A user must use the Power Apps mobile app in online mode until the first sync is completed.
+- **First sync**: This sync is the initial offline sync that occurs for the Power Apps mobile app. All data in the offline profile is downloaded to the device. A user must use the Power Apps mobile app in online mode until the first sync is completed.
 
-  The first sync, which is the longest sync, is triggered when you sign-in to the Power Apps mobile app. It is also triggered after using the Reconfigure action (not recommended).
+  The first sync, which is the longest sync, is triggered when you sign in to the Power Apps mobile app. It's also triggered after using the Reconfigure action (not recommended).
 
-- **Delta sync** - This sync is the fastest sync, and occurs regularly based on the offline configuration for the organization. For example, a delta sync could occur every five minutes. Only data that has changed since the last sync occurred is downloaded to the mobile device.
+- **Delta sync**: This sync is the fastest sync and occurs regularly based on the offline configuration for the organization. For example, a delta sync could occur every five minutes. Only data that has changed since the last sync is downloaded to the mobile device.
 
-- **Full delta sync** - When you select **Refresh** on the **Device status** page, you trigger a full sync. A full sync doesn't redownload data, but it does recheck every record on the device, so it may take longer than a regular delta sync.
+- **Full delta sync**: When you select **Refresh** on the **Device status** page, you trigger a full sync. A full sync doesn't redownload data, but it does recheck every record on the device, so it may take longer than a regular delta sync.
 
-- **Grid sync** - If you select **Refresh** on a grid or calendar view, the app will immediately synchronize all tables visible in the view. When the sync is complete, the view will refresh automatically.
+- **Grid sync**: If you select **Refresh** on a grid or calendar view, the app immediately synchronizes all tables visible in the view. When the sync is complete, the view refreshes automatically.
 
 ## Offline Status page
 
-When you select the offline sync icon, the **Offline Status** page opens. The **Offline Status** page provides details such as what data was downloaded, whether there is data waiting to upload, and the amount of storage the app is using.
+When you select the offline sync icon, the **Offline Status** page opens. The **Offline Status** page provides details such as what data was downloaded, whether data is waiting to be uploaded, and the amount of storage the app uses.
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/OfflineStatusPage-NotConnected.png" alt-text="The Offline Status page of a mobile app.":::