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powerapps-docs/developer/model-driven-apps/clientapi/debug-JavaScript-code.md

@@ -18,9 +18,9 @@ contributors:
 
 Custom logic using JavaScript in model-driven apps are contained within JavaScript web resources. JavaScript web resources provide the libraries that define functions developers register as event handlers.
 
-In a model-driven app viewed within a web browser, you can use developer tools that all modern browsers provide. With these tools you can locate the JavaScript libraries loaded in the model-driven application, set break points and debug your code using common methods.
+In a model-driven app viewed within a web browser, you can use developer tools that all modern browsers provide. With these tools you can locate the JavaScript libraries loaded in the model-driven application, set break points, and debug your code using common methods.
 
-Model-driven apps viewed using mobile apps on Android, or the Windows desktop app require some additional steps. See:
+Model-driven apps viewed using mobile apps on Android, or the Windows desktop app require some more steps. See:
 
 - [Debug JavaScript in mobile apps on Android](#debug-javascript-in-mobile-apps-on-android)
 - [Debug JavaScript in mobile apps on iOS](#debug-javascript-in-mobile-apps-on-ios)
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ Model-driven apps viewed using mobile apps on Android, or the Windows desktop ap
 
 More information:
 
-- [mdn web docs: What are browser developer tools?](https://developer.mozilla.org/docs/Learn/Common_questions/What_are_browser_developer_tools).
+- [Mdn web docs: What are browser developer tools?](https://developer.mozilla.org/docs/Learn/Common_questions/What_are_browser_developer_tools).
 
    - [Microsoft Edge Sources](/microsoft-edge/devtools-guide-chromium/sources/)
    - [Google Chrome Sources](https://developer.chrome.com/docs/devtools/sources/)
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ When an event handler causes a script error in a model-driven app, the following
 
 :::image type="content" source="media/script-error-dialog.png" alt-text="Script error dialog":::
 
-If you click the **Show Details** link, you can find the details that include: event name, function name, web resource name, solution name, and publisher name.
+If you select the **Show Details** link, you can find the details that include: event name, function name, web resource name, solution name, and publisher name.
 
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@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ In this case, the name of the function was incorrect, `openalertDialog` should b
 
 While using JavaScript web resources for mobile scenarios, you can use your Android device to debug your mobile-specific code and ensure it works as expected.
 
-To debug JavaScript in mobile apps on Android, you must complete the three steps below:
+To debug JavaScript in mobile apps on Android, you must complete the following three steps:
 
 ### 1. Configure your device
 
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ To debug JavaScript in mobile apps on Android, you must complete the three steps
 
 1. In the mobile app, go to the list of Power Apps and select on the menu button.
 1. Make sure that the toggle **Enable remote debugging for model-driven apps** is on.
-1. When enabling this option, there's a confirmation dialog. Select **Confirm**.
+1. There's a confirmation dialog when you enable this option. Select **Confirm**.
 
 ### 3. Debug from your development machine
 
@@ -96,15 +96,15 @@ To debug JavaScript in mobile apps on Android, you must complete the three steps
 
    :::image type="content" source="media/edge-inspect-devices.png" alt-text="Edge DevTools Devices screen":::
 
-1. Click on **inspect**.
+1. Select on **inspect**.
 
 More information: [Microsoft Edge: Remotely debug Android devices](/microsoft-edge/devtools-guide-chromium/remote-debugging/)
 
 ## Debug JavaScript in mobile apps on iOS
 
 You can use Safari on a Mac to debug JavaScript web resources on iOS.
 
-To debug JavaScript in mobile apps on iOS, you must complete the two steps below:
+To debug JavaScript in mobile apps on iOS, you must complete the following two steps:
 
 ### 1. Configure the mobile application
 
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ To debug JavaScript on Windows, you must first install the prerequisite applicat
 
    1. Open **Windows Settings** > **Privacy & security** > **For developers**.
    1. Enable **Device Portal**.
-   1. Click **Yes** to install Windows Developer Mode package when prompted.
+   1. Select **Yes** to install Windows Developer Mode package when prompted.
    1. Once Device Portal is enabled, **note the URL you will use to connect using localhost**. On most devices, it's `https://localhost:50080`  
    1. For debugging Power Apps / Field Service Mobile locally, you can continue with **Restrict to loopback connections only** enabled and **Authentication** disabled (otherwise you need to set a user password)
 
@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ Use the **Run command** (shortcut is `Windows + R`) and use the following deep l
 
    :::image type="content" source="media/devtools-configuration-for-windows.png" alt-text="Inspect in the DevTools screen":::
 
-1. Click **inspect** and the DevTools will open.
+1. Select **inspect** and the DevTools opens.
 
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