Acrolinx revisions

Author: Mattp123

powerapps-docs/maker/model-driven-apps/model-app-page-issues.md

@@ -22,9 +22,9 @@ The custom page is a new page type within model-driven apps. Custom pages bring
 
 * When a custom page is modified, such as saved and published, the model-driven app isn't aware of the change. The model-driven app will continue to use the last version of the custom page when the model-driven app was published. A model-driven app published through app designer, solution explorer, or **Publish all** will update all custom pages in the model-driven app.
 
-* Images, icons and shapes are not currently supported with Right-To-Left (RTL) languages.
+* Images, icons and shapes aren't currently supported with Right-To-Left (RTL) languages.
 
-* The ability to get the current data formats from users settings including date, time, numbers and currency is not supported.
+* The ability to get the current data formats from users settings including date, time, numbers and currency isn't supported.
 
 * Custom pages use a canvas app hosting session that can time out after 8 hours.  However, the Unified Interface session has a longer timeout. When the timeout happens, an error message bar appears that prompts the user to refresh the browser.
 
@@ -45,17 +45,17 @@ The custom page is a new page type within model-driven apps. Custom pages bring
 
 ## User-related issues
 
-* When a user with no Power Apps user privileges opens a custom page in the model-driven app, they will see an error mentioning no active entitlements to use PowerApps.  More information: [Licensing overview for Microsoft Power Platform](/power-platform/admin/pricing-billing-skus) and the associated licensing guide.
+* When a user with no Power Apps user privileges opens a custom page in the model-driven app, they'll see an error mentioning no active entitlements to use Power Apps.  More information: [Licensing overview for Microsoft Power Platform](/power-platform/admin/pricing-billing-skus) and the associated licensing guide.
 
 * Custom pages require third-party cookies to be enabled, which is required by the canvas app runtime.
 
-* When a user is prompted for consent with connectors and selects **Don't allow**, the custom page will render but without data.  The user doesn't get notified that data retrieval is skipped.
+* When a user is prompted for consent with connectors and selects **Don't allow**, the custom page renders but without data.  The user doesn't get notified that data retrieval is skipped.
 
-* After a model-driven app or custom page is changed and published, loading a custom page can take longer than normal and no page loading spinner is shown.
+* After a model-driven app or custom page is changed and published, loading a custom page can take longer than normal, and no page loading spinner is shown.
 
 * Native player support is available for iOS, Android, and Windows in online-only mode. Offline support currently isn't supported.
 
-* When navigating back to a custom page from another page, the page state isn't restored so the page appears like a new navigation. State is also not persisted when switching between multi-session tabs in multi-session apps. For more information about multi-session support with model-driven apps, go to [Customer Service workspace sessions and tabs](/dynamics365/customer-service/csw-overview?tabs=customerserviceadmincenter).
+* When you navigate back to a custom page from another page, the page state isn't restored so the page appears like a new navigation. State is also not persisted when switching between multi-session tabs in multi-session apps. For more information about multi-session support with model-driven apps, go to [Customer Service workspace sessions and tabs](/dynamics365/customer-service/csw-overview?tabs=customerserviceadmincenter).
 
 * While attempting to sign in, the current behavior caused by a user selecting anywhere away from the sign in box causes the pop out window for sign in to shift behind the app browser.