Acronlinx improvements

Author: Mattp123

powerapps-docs/maker/data-platform/data-get-insights-overview.md

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 # Get insights from your data
 
-Microsoft Dataverse is the intelligent data platform that powers Dynamics 365 apps as well as the Power Platform. All Dynamics 365 data, including those from finance and operations apps and customer engagement apps like Dynamics 365 Sales, Dynamics 365 Customer Service are hosted by Dataverse. Dynamics 365 applications can be extended with Power Platform tools like Power Apps, Power Automate, and Power Pages for low-code and pro-code extensions. Data from Power Platform apps in turn are also hosted by Dataverse.
+Microsoft Dataverse is the intelligent data platform that powers Dynamics 365 apps and the Power Platform. All Dynamics 365 data is hosted in Dataverse. The data included data from finance and operations apps and customer engagement apps like Dynamics 365 Sales and Dynamics 365 Customer Service. Dynamics 365 applications can be extended with Power Platform tools like Power Apps, Power Automate, and Power Pages for low-code and pro-code extensions. Data from Power Platform apps is also hosted in Dataverse.
 
-By understanding the data and its intent, Dataverse provides turnkey capabilities in a consistent manner for all its data. It’s not just a database or storage, it encompasses everything that's needed to build integrated applications, processes, and in turn provides insights from the data it hosts. Dataverse also provides a comprehensive governance framework for your data including granular role based security as well as audit and compliance. Because it's a low-code data platform, developers can spend more time focusing on business needs through the configuration of the system and less time building infrastructure.
+When you understand the data and its intent, Dataverse provides turnkey capabilities in a consistent manner for all your data. Dataverse isn't just a database or storage, it encompasses everything needed to build integrated applications, processes, and in turn provides insights from the data it hosts. Dataverse also provides a comprehensive governance framework for your data including granular role based security and audit and compliance. Because it's a low-code data platform, developers can spend more time focusing on business needs through the configuration of the system and less time building infrastructure.
 
 There are several approaches to getting insights from your data hosted by Dataverse:
 
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 - [Azure Synapse Link](export-to-data-lake.md) enables continuous export of data to your own Azure data lake and enables IT admins and data integration specialists to create data pipelines.
 
-Data export service, BYOD, and Export to Data Lake were features introduced in Dynamics 365 apps to export data for analytics and data integration scenarios. These services enabled IT admins and specialists to export data into external databases or data lakes and build data integration pipelines. While we have improved these services over the years with updates, as part of unification of Dynamics 365 with the Power Platform, we have rearchitected the same capabilities of these disparate services into simpler, unified experiences built into Power Apps (make.powerapps.com). By transitioning to Fabric link or upgrading to Azure Synapse Link, these features provide you with an easy ramp to benefit from AI and Copilot investments in Dataverse and Fabric. Go to the [transition from legacy integration services](azure-synapse-link-transition-from-FnO.md) article for more information about how you can transition to Dataverse insights.
+Data export service, bring your own device (BYOD), and Export to Data Lake were features introduced in Dynamics 365 apps to export data for analytics and data integration scenarios. These services enabled IT admins and specialists to export data into external databases or data lakes and build data integration pipelines. While we have improved these services over the years with updates, as part of unification of Dynamics 365 with the Power Platform, we rearchitected the same capabilities of these disparate services into simpler, unified experiences built into Power Apps (make.powerapps.com). When you transition to Fabric link or upgrading to Azure Synapse Link, these features provide you with an easy ramp to benefit from AI and Copilot investments in Dataverse and Fabric. Go to the [transition from legacy integration services](azure-synapse-link-transition-from-FnO.md) article for more information about how you can transition to Dataverse insights.