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Author: Nkrb

powerapps-docs/sample-apps/return-to-workplace/app-for-health-and-safety-lead.md

@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ The Workplace Care Management app has the following components:
 Lists all the cases that have been created.
 
 > [!div class="mx-imgBorder"]
-> ![Employee cases](media/health-safety-employee-cases.png "Employee cases")
+> ![List of Employee cases](media/health-safety-employee-cases.png "List of Employee cases")
 
 In the Employee Cases component, we have three views with different filters:
 
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ You can create a new employee contact if the contact doesn't exist.
    | Preferred Method of Contact | Select the method of contact the employee prefers from the drop-down list. |
 
    > [!div class="mx-imgBorder"]
-   > ![Create a contact](media/health-safety-employee-new2.png "Create a contact")
+   > ![Create a contact details](media/health-safety-employee-new2.png "Create a contact details")
 
 3. Select **Save & Close**. The newly created record is available in the
     **Active Contacts** view.

powerapps-docs/sample-apps/return-to-workplace/configure.md

@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ To edit the record, select it, update the values, and then select **Save & Close
 1. Select the **Readiness Factors** tab.
 
    > [!div class="mx-imgBorder"]
-   > ![Readiness factors](media/solution-admin-reopen-phase-view-readiness-factors.png "Readiness factors")
+   > ![Readiness factors for a phase](media/solution-admin-reopen-phase-view-readiness-factors.png "Readiness factors for a phase")
 
 2. Select **Add Existing Readiness Factor**.
 

powerapps-docs/sample-apps/return-to-workplace/dashboard-case-management.md

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 ---
 title: Use the Case Management dashboard
-description: Provides an overview of insights through dashboards.
+description: Provides an overview of case management dashboards.
 author: wbakker-11
 ms.service: powerapps
 ms.topic: conceptual

powerapps-docs/sample-apps/return-to-workplace/dashboard-for-executive-leadership.md

@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ The Occupancy section provides metrics regarding facility capacity and usage, su
    - Average daily occupancy, shown as a black bar. Capacity is represented by the green zone.  Facilities with black bars in the red zone are over-capacity.
 
 > [!div class="mx-imgBorder"]
-> ![Readiness Checklist](media/pbi-dash-report-facility-at-a-glance-occupancy.png "Readiness Checklist")
+> ![Readiness Checklist Occupancy](media/pbi-dash-report-facility-at-a-glance-occupancy.png "Readiness Checklist occupancy")
 
 ## Employee Activity 
 

powerapps-docs/sample-apps/return-to-workplace/deploy.md

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ author: wbakker-11
 ms.service: powerapps
 ms.topic: conceptual
 ms.custom: 
-ms.date: 07/21/2020
+ms.date: 08/21/2020
 ms.author: garybird
 ms.reviewer: kvivek
 ---
@@ -169,20 +169,20 @@ The facility manager Power BI dashboard is used in the model-driven app. Because
 2. From the list of entities, select **Facility (msft_facility)** > **select components**, under the **Forms** tab, select **Main - Information Form**, and then select **Add** to finish the process. 
 
    > [!div class="mx-imgBorder"]
-   > ![Enable Power BI](media/deploy-settings-report1.png "Step1")
+   > ![Enable Power BI](media/deploy-settings-report1.png "Enable Power BI")
 
 3. Within the newly created solution, select **Export** . On the right side of your browser a window pops up, select **Publish**, select **Run** to check whether the solution has any issues or dependencies, and then select **Next**.  With the **Version number** and **Unmanaged** option selected, select **Export**.
 
 4. In the **Download** dialog box, select **Save**, and in the **Download complete** dialog box, select **Open Folder**. Right-click to select the compressed .zip file that you downloaded, and then select **Extract All**. Select a ___location to extract the files to, and then select **Extract**. The customizations.xml file is the file that you'll edit.
 
 5. Open the customization.xml file,, look for the section similar to the XML code specified in this example: https://docs.microsoft.com/powerapps/maker/model-driven-apps/embed-powerbi-report-in-system-form#embed-without-contextual-filtering  
 
-    In this XML file you need to update the **PowerBIGroupID**, **PowerBIReportID** and **TileURL** according to your PowerBI workspace and report. You can find this information by opening the Facility Manager report in PowerBI and examine the URL: https://...powerbi.com/groups/PowerBIGroupID/reports/PowerBIReportID/ReportSection 
+    In this XML file you need to update the **PowerBIGroupID**, **PowerBIReportID** and **TileURL** according to your PowerBI workspace and report. You can find this information by opening the Facility Manager report in PowerBI and examine the URL: https://powerbi.com/groups/PowerBIGroupID/reports/PowerBIReportID/ReportSection 
 
     The `TileURL` can be found within the PowerBI report. You can find it at the following destination **... (ellipsis)** > **Embed** > **Website or portal**. 
 
    > [!div class="mx-imgBorder"]
-   > ![Enable Power BI](media/deploy-settings-report2.png "Step1")
+   > ![Power BI TileURL](media/deploy-settings-report2.png "Power BI TileURL")
 
    From the displayed `Secure embed code` window, capture the content of the link in the first field up to the end of the `PowerBIReportID` (as shown in the example code). 
 
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ You can change the look and feel of the app by applying themes to match your com
 1. Open the **Facility Safety Management** app or the **Workplace Care Management** app, in the top right select the gear icon and select **Advanced Settings**.
 
    > [!div class="mx-imgBorder"]
-   > ![Customizations](media/deploy-advanced-settings.png "Advanced Settings")
+   > ![Advanced Settings](media/deploy-advanced-settings.png "Advanced Settings")
 
 2. Go to **Settings** > **Customizations**.
 
@@ -263,7 +263,7 @@ In the Return to the Workplace solution, the following security roles are define
 1. Open the **Facility Safety Management** app or the **Workplace Care Management** app, in the top right select the gear icon and then select **Advanced Settings**.
 
    > [!div class="mx-imgBorder"]
-   > ![Customizations](media/deploy-advanced-settings.png "Advanced Settings")
+   > ![Customizations Advance Settings](media/deploy-advanced-settings.png " Customizations Advanced Settings")
 
 2. Go to **Settings** > **Security**.
 
@@ -351,18 +351,18 @@ After extracting the .zip file, you'll see the following in the extracted folder
 
 This section provides information about how GCC customers can use the **Return to the Workplace - Location Readiness** and **Return to the Workplace - Facility Manager** dashboard .pbit files available in the deployment package to publish the dashboards.
 
-#### Prerequisites
+#### Prerequisites for installing Power BI
 
 Install Power BI Desktop from Microsoft Store: [Power BI Desktop](https://aka.ms/pbidesktop)
 
 > [!NOTE]
 > If you installed Power BI Desktop by downloading it directly from the Download Center page in the past, remove it and then download it from Microsoft Store. The Microsoft Store version will be updated automatically as new releases become available. If you can't install from Microsoft Store, install the latest non–Microsoft Store version from the [Download Center page](https://www.microsoft.com/download/details.aspx?id=58494).
 
-#### The process
+**Process**
 
 Follow the steps below for each .pbit file.
 
-1. Run Power BI Desktop, and sign in using your account.
+1. Open Power BI Desktop, and sign in using your account.
 
 2. Go to the ___location where you extracted the deployment package (.zip file). In the **Power BI Template** folder, you'll find the appropriate .pbit file.
 
@@ -381,27 +381,27 @@ Follow the steps below for each .pbit file.
 6. After connecting to your Common Data Service environment, you'll see a series of pop-up windows to configure access to data sources. These access-level and privacy-level settings need to be configured to connect to the public data sources for the COVID-19 report data. Complete access level and privacy selections as shown in the following screenshots.
 
     > [!div class="mx-imgBorder"] 
-    > ![Access Web Content level](media/deploy-access-web-content-level.png "Grant anonymous access to the Web Content level")
+    > ![Access Web Content level](media/deploy-access-web-content-level.png "Access Web Content level")
 
     > [!div class="mx-imgBorder"] 
-    > ![Access Web Content level](media/deploy-gcc-web-acesss-level-connect.png "Grant anonymous access to the Web Content")
+    > ![Grant anonymous access to the Web Content](media/deploy-gcc-web-acesss-level-connect.png "Grant anonymous access to the Web Content")
 
     > [!div class="mx-imgBorder"] 
-    > ![Access Web Content level](media/deploy-gcc-web-acesss-level.png "Grant anonymous access to the Web Content")
+    > ![Anonymous access to the Web Content](media/deploy-gcc-web-acesss-level.png "Anonymous access to the Web Content")
 
     > [!div class="mx-imgBorder"] 
-    > ![Access Web Content level](media/deploy-gcc-web-acesss-privacy-levels.png "Grant anonymous access to the Web Content")
+    > ![Privacy level](media/deploy-gcc-web-acesss-privacy-levels.png "Privacy level")
 
     > [!div class="mx-imgBorder"] 
-    > ![Access Web Content level](media/deploy-gcc-web-acesss-privacy-select-anonymous.png)
+    > ![Anonymous privacy select](media/deploy-gcc-web-acesss-privacy-select-anonymous.png "Anonymous privacy select")
     
     > [!div class="mx-imgBorder"] 
-    > ![Access Web Content level](media/deploy-gcc-web-acesss-privacy-levels-blob-storage-public.png "Grant anonymous access to the Web Content")
+    > ![Privacy level blob storage](media/deploy-gcc-web-acesss-privacy-levels-blob-storage-public.png "Privacy level blob storage")
 
     After you've configured the access and privacy levels for COVID-19 public data, you must set the privacy level for Common Data Service data to **Organizational**. 
 
     > [!div class="mx-imgBorder"] 
-    > ![Access Web Content level](media/deploy-gcc-web-acesss-privacy-levels-CDS.png)
+    > ![Access Web Content level CDS](media/deploy-gcc-web-acesss-privacy-levels-CDS.png "Access Web Content level CDS")
 
 7. After a connection is successfully made, the Power BI report will be displayed. You'll be prompted to apply pending changes to your query. Select **Apply changes**.
 

powerapps-docs/sample-apps/return-to-workplace/media/employee-select-area.png

@@ -26,8 +26,6 @@ The main modules of the Return to the Workplace solution include:
 
 - **Employee Return to the Workplace** offers your workforce the self-service tool that they need to feel confident about returning and remain productive while onsite. They can use Employee Return to the Workplace to check in to work remotely and self-screen before entering a building.
 
-
-
 ## Licensing requirements
 
 - Power Apps license

powerapps-docs/sample-apps/return-to-workplace/media/employee-select-facility.png

@@ -1,25 +1,23 @@
 ---
 title: Upgrade the Return to the Workplace solution for Microsoft Power Platform | Microsoft Docs
-description: Provides an overview of the Return to the Workplace solution.
+description: Provides an overview of how to upgrade the Return to the Workplace solution.
 author: wbakker-11
 ms.service: powerapps
 ms.topic: conceptual
 ms.custom: 
-ms.date: 08/21/2020
+ms.date: 08/25/2020
 ms.author: garybird
 ms.reviewer: kvivek
 ---
 # Upgrade the Return to Work solution.
 
-Follow the steps in this article to upgrade your existing installation of Return to Work solution to the latest version. 
+This article provide step-by-step instructions on how to upgrade the existing Return to Work solution to the latest version. If you're deploying the solution for the first time, see [deploy solution](deploy.md) article.
 
-If this is the first time you deploy the solution, look into Deploy Solution.
-
-## Prerequisites 
+## Prerequisites
 
 - Ensure you have the Global Admin credentials and environment details where the Return to Work solution is deployed currently. 
 
-- Ensure all users are disconnected from your environment before you upgrade. You might have to plan the upgrade process at a time when there is minimal obstruction for your users. 
+- Ensure all the users are disconnected from your environment before you upgrade. You might have to plan the upgrade process at a time when there is minimal obstruction for your users. 
 
 ## Step 1: Update the Package